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A Disappointment
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A Disappointment |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
A Disappointment Yesterday I was a disappointment Yesterday I saw love Today I see disappointment What have I done? I look into your eyes I see hate I have disappointed you I don't know why Why am I so stupid? A disappointment I did wrong, but why? I am not what you wanted Useless for a human Why did I do wrong? Why am I never right? Always a disappointment Never what you wanted Why am I here? I should just die This is the last time I will be A disappointment "True friends stab you in the front" |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Chel- That was a good poem, but you put yourself down so much!! I really hope you weren't writing this about yourself, because you shouldn't be so mean to yourself. I know I'm not one to talk. Incase you did write this about yourself, I'm SURE you're not usless, dissappointing, stupid, or even wrong, and you SHOULDN'T die!!!!! You're a great writer, so keep up the writing, and keep your chin up- Bel |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Girl, you are NOT a disappointment! Please don't ever feel that way!! You were given life for a reason and for that reason, you shall not be a disappointment! The Heavenly Father doesn't make disappointments in creation. Please just keep your head up, I'm sure whatever this thing is that is bothering you so bad will pass with time! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Well, so far, you've been nothin but a friend to me and that isn't exactly my idea of dissapointing. Whoever you feel as though you've dissapointed expects way too much.. I just pray that you can truly realize that...I know it's hard. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
your far from being what you say. and you express the true you here in every poem you write i love. so do please keep it up so i have something to read. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
just like jessica said god doesnt make us disappointments...even if you do disappoint yourself we all do...we all make mistakes and those are the consequences of life...hey we may not like it but we got to play by the rules...and killing yourself isnt worth it...just remember god loves you and so do alot of other people... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
hey guys, I want to thank you all for reading my poems. This one wasn't personal to me. I am very gracious to have friends like you to care about me. I hope that you all realize that I would never do something like that. I have so much to live for. Take care. Luv always, Chel "True friends stab you in the front" |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Chel you are not a dissapiontment. If anybody would have you believe otherwise, it's because the trully hate you and seek to destroy you. Stay strong max |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I'm going to join the crowd in saying you are anything but a disappointment, I truly admire fellow(ess) writers and consider them 'kindred spirits' of mine. Your poem was wonderful, full of passion and feeling. I commend you. *~Meredith~* I am none but the angel Who sings you to sleep As you pray to God Your soul to keep *Me |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh dear Chel ... I'm so glad you said this wasn't personally about you. You've got such great talent from what I've seen here already, and you've clearly been able to express your thoughts well in this verse. Very emotional and heart-wrenching Chel. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
As long as you think you've done the right thing or the best you could do, that's all that matters. Other peoples opinions should be second hand. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
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