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Essencesofdreams New Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 4 |
The rainbow of how you make me feel: Red=the Passion and willingness to love me Orange=the way you always remind me about the finer things in life Yellow=The sunshine and brightness you bring my life Green=If Im sick Your not afraid to get close with me blue=The way your cool blue eyes wash over me like a flood Purple=When I see you,you make me feel warm and fuzzie inside This Is to my Boyfriend who does all this for me and soo much more!! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hi there! This is a wonderful piece, and it's great that you think of your love each time you see these colors. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
This was very sweet. Colors are great, aren't they?? Keep posting!! ~Carly |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
aww this was so sweet, im glad you have someone in your life that makes you feel all those things! great job *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
love the idea of bring colors into your poetry! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nice job on this poem, it's good that you have someone like this  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions. Good one here.....i hope to see more from u.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
This was so adorable! Colors are such a great way to express your feelings like this. You're lucky that you have someone that does all of this for you. Great poem! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
 This was such a creative way of expressing your feelings!!! I absolutely loved it, it was sooooo adorible!! Great poem and your very talented and creative!!! |
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