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Essencesofdreams
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0 posted 2000-12-29 01:59 AM


The rainbow of how you make me feel:

Red=the Passion and willingness to love me

Orange=the way you always remind me about the finer things in life

Yellow=The sunshine and brightness you bring my life

Green=If Im sick Your not afraid to get close with me

blue=The way your cool blue eyes wash over me like a flood

Purple=When I see you,you make me feel warm and fuzzie inside


This Is to my Boyfriend who does all this for me and soo much more!!

© Copyright 2000 Erica Grover - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-12-29 10:24 AM


Hi there! This is a wonderful piece, and it's great that you think of your love each time you see these colors. Thanks for posting.

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
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2 posted 2000-12-29 12:24 PM



  This was very sweet. Colors are great, aren't they?? Keep posting!!

   ~Carly

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3 posted 2000-12-29 01:32 PM


aww this was so sweet, im glad you have someone in your life that makes you feel all those things! great job

*dq


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4 posted 2000-12-29 02:09 PM


love the idea of bring colors into your poetry!
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5 posted 2000-12-29 04:35 PM


Nice job on this poem, it's good that you have someone like this

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6 posted 2000-12-29 06:03 PM


Welcome to Passions.
Good one here.....i hope to see more from u.



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7 posted 2000-12-29 08:14 PM


This was so adorable! Colors are such a great way to express your feelings like this. You're lucky that you have someone that does all of this for you. Great poem!
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8 posted 2000-12-30 11:05 AM


This was such a creative way of expressing your feelings!!! I absolutely loved it, it was sooooo adorible!! Great poem and your very talented and creative!!!


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