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TearsOfPearls
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0 posted 2000-12-28 03:39 AM


A flame burning cold
in shadows dreams made,
dying to glow warm
in hopes that won't fade.

A flame burning cold
in a tunnel of changing air,
fighting a strength
that just never was there.

A flame burning cold,
struggling to keep sight
of the fuel it thirsts,
it's giving up the fight.

Another dream burning cold,
another flame left untold.

Hey all you ppl....man...luck just ain't on my side...our computer was struck by lightning and I have been offline for the last month...yay for friends with the internet! So sorry once again for being gone so long and just suddenly dropping in!   But I'll see you ppl again after new year. Have a happy new year!!!  

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

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LoveBug
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1 posted 2000-12-28 10:22 AM


This is a wonderful piece. It is hard to keep our dreams burning sometimes, isn't it? Thanks for sharing, and I hope you're back for good soon!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



Pixie-Babe03
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2 posted 2000-12-28 12:45 PM


wow this is wonderful...  it is so deep! i love it    keep writing you are very talented
~*pixie*!

Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-12-29 10:07 AM


Hey,
Good job on writing the poem!!  I'm glad to hear you'll be back

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DancinQueen
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4 posted 2000-12-29 01:10 PM


talk about a strike of luck huh?   awesome poem..keep it up

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Acies
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5 posted 2000-12-29 01:39 PM


"Another dream burning cold,
another flame left untold."

simply marvelous....what more can i say  



I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


jeremydraul
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6 posted 2000-12-29 02:00 PM


wow, how ironic, that happen to me a few years back... i got zapped too... Well this poem rocked, i liked the rhyme and words.

~JDR

"A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis

HiddenSparklez
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7 posted 2000-12-29 02:15 PM


great poem... i always like to read how people view flames...
Dopey Dope
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8 posted 2000-12-29 05:11 PM


This was nice.......flamez...interesting theme.



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