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Burning Cold.
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Burning Cold. |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa 
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A flame burning cold in shadows dreams made, dying to glow warm in hopes that won't fade. A flame burning cold in a tunnel of changing air, fighting a strength that just never was there. A flame burning cold, struggling to keep sight of the fuel it thirsts, it's giving up the fight. Another dream burning cold, another flame left untold. Hey all you ppl....man...luck just ain't on my side...our computer was struck by lightning and I have been offline for the last month...yay for friends with the internet! So sorry once again for being gone so long and just suddenly dropping in!  But I'll see you ppl again after new year. Have a happy new year!!! Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderful piece. It is hard to keep our dreams burning sometimes, isn't it? Thanks for sharing, and I hope you're back for good soon! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
wow this is wonderful... it is so deep! i love it keep writing you are very talented~*pixie*! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, Good job on writing the poem!! I'm glad to hear you'll be back "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
talk about a strike of luck huh?  awesome poem..keep it up¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
"Another dream burning cold, another flame left untold." simply marvelous....what more can i say I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
wow, how ironic, that happen to me a few years back... i got zapped too... Well this poem rocked, i liked the rhyme and words.~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
great poem... i always like to read how people view flames... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was nice.......flamez...interesting theme.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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