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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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We look into our world and see Only illusions of what is there We can’t see through the fog in Our minds and our hearts The illusion of love is almost as Pronounced as the myth of the unicorn Everyone else can see it, but we can’t We choose not to believe In what we don’t want to know We know the truth, deep down You used to be the sensible one I was the naïve one Our roles have been reversed and I’m Not sure how much more I can take Illusions are dangerous when Taken out of context and believed If it was real, if there was a chance I might think differently, but I can’t think In a way that I know is not true I thought I was in love, but I know I’m not I love you, but I’m not in love Don’t ever believe illusions They aren’t true never have been nor ever will be Illusions are just games our minds and our hearts Like to play with us to make our lives interesting I love you so much I don’t want to hurt you but how much longer Can I go on living a way that I know doesn’t suit me? I just can’t do it any longer I wish I knew an easier Way out but there isn’t any I will never ever forget you As long as I live I will remember you It’s time for me to say goodbye though It’s been fun and I’ll cherish the moments we spent Together and spent talking to each other You will always be special to me no matter what happens Always will you be one of my best friends Catch the tears that are falling from your eyes and Just remember to smile and that life will get better Even without me it will get better You’ll find the girl for you and you will be happy We'll both be happy when we're no longer living with Illusions |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Wow that was awesome. wow wow wow lol i loved this.. *click* straight into my libary, cant wait to read more!! *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
That was excellent!! I really like that! The ending was great!! Well written. Nice work, keep writing!! Much Luv, ~*~SweetStuff~*~< !signature--> ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 12-27-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Skyfire! We are very happy you have decided to join our community of poetry friendship. This is a wonderful first post. It is indeed difficult to live with illusions, very nicely expressed. I hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
geez people around here always miss the good ones..im bumpin this to the top  ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
true... very good writing  jeremy r "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
welcome to passions..this was a great first post..i loved it...i hoep to read more soon.. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Welcome to you e-poetry family...you'll find people in here to be really nice You know, you have almost the same name as someone else in here. Her name though is Skyfyre. I think that's the way it's spelled, but she's at open poetry. She's one of my favorite writers in here. Well, you both almost have the same way of writing, i guess you both are talented. I loved every single line i read, so keep em coming..... I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
~*bump*~ ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
Welcome To passions. this was a great first poem. I didn't even notice it til today. God Bless, - tq_99 "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions I think this one is written very well, I like the flow of it. Your feelings were put into it very well, I really like the poem. Nice work "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. Welcome to Passions! Hope to see more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
Welcome to Passions!! This poem was so amazing, because everything that you said was so real...about illusions being games played by our minds and our hearts. Great poem! |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Welcome to Passions!! I really hope you stay long with the big family here Awesome first post! I cant wait to read more from you. Keep em coming...*Jennifer |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was a great first post!! Im shur that you'll enjoy it here as much as the rest of us. I cant wait to read more from you! WELCOME!! |
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Virgil Junior Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 43Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
This post seems to keep coming to the top...so I guess I'll jump on the bandwagon! *~~*Bumpety Bump!!*~*~ "By other ways, by other ferries, not here, shalt thou pass over: a lighter boat must carry thee." |
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