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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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Changing.... If forever changed, for you and me, I would make it, the way I expect it to be. If forever changed, just like the seasons, I would make it special, for plenty of reasons. If forever changed, just like a clock with time, I would stop the time, so you would always be mine. If forever changed, like the colors in the sky, I would keep them bright, like the colors of your eyes. If forever changed, like it did when I fell in love with you, I wouldnt change a thing, cause I love you. People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Hey, this is awsome. I loved it. It's such a happy poem too. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great poem, it isn't often I see happy poems in here - and it is always great to see them.. I am glad you are happy!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Isgona & Melster...Thank you both for the replies. They mean alot to me... People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Erin....hey wuz up?? That was a great poem!!! I'm finally back here, after many weeks of hell....but just in time to see one of these great posts of yours. Awesome babe  Salma |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful thoughts you've penned Erin, and a lovely flow and theme you've composed, nicely done! Happy Holidays and best wishes, /Kit |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Hey Erin! How goes it girl? Remember me? It's been a while. Well this poem was excellent and a very lovely. Keep'em comin'! Angel In order to be good one must know evil. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
That was soo sweet!! So beautiful too!!! I love it! Hope all works out well for ya!! Nicely done, keep writing!!! Much Luv, Priscilla PS~ Happy Holidays!! ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm very impressed with you work cheese cake. Is there something going on in your life right now that's made you write with such emotions and passion? If there is, I hope it's making you happier. Hey, when are you gonna be on again? We don't see you anymore  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem is good, I'm glad to see a happy one too "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such a beautiful poem gurl...its so nice to see happy poems!! Great job hun... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good one here erin...nice.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
This is really cute...I loved it. It was really creative and unique. Great job |
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