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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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Forgive Me... I climb out to my roof I reach out to the stars I belt out all me prayers I find out all my scars I have hurt many people I have told many lies I have turned my back I have sinned many times "Please forgive my tainted soul Please send me some regard; Please forgive my weaknesses You made this world to hard" "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
good poem!! just remember that everybody sins, everybody lies and everybody hurts people! if you ever need to talk or anything email me at [email protected] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is good!!! I liked this one a lot....keep posting pal!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great poem... just remember not to bottle everything up inside you... talk to someone about it because otherwise you will hurt yourself too much and won't be able to figure out what is going on!! Good Luck!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. Just as before, I say this is a terrific poem...and how come its gotta be so hard? Well..catcha on the flipside... ~Carly WhY ShOuLd I Be hypnotized by someone else's lies WhY ShOuLd I Take time and pride in what someone else believes... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
ooooops sorry. [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 12-24-2000).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
You know, Isgona, I don't even know your real name, however you hardly strike me as an unkind soul.  Everybody sins, God created us as imperfect beings, and if we realize our faults, and attempt to correct them, then we are doing what God wants. No one is perfect! And I believe that if you claimed to be, that makes you imperfect just for saying so! Don't be too hard on yourself, we've all been there, and it does begin to feel better. Good luck sweetie!! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Well it's like 12:01 Christmas morning so first of.. Merry Christmas Secondly thank you, every one that replied. Don't worry about me though, this wasn't really a sad poem for me at all. I just realize that I am human. It means a lot< !signature--> "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 12-25-2000).] |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
great lines here, specially "Please forgive my tainted soul Please send me some regard; Please forgive my weaknesses You made this world to hard" nice ending! jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Isgona~ Throughout our lives we are gonna make many mistakes and sin alot. But its something we have to go through to live. Good for you for admitting what youve done. I know I wouldnt be able to do that. Good work buddy!!! And Merry Christmas to you too!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
i gotta agree with the rest... this is surely a wonderful post. i always believe that God forgives those who believe in him, good luck Salma |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thank you for the replies. Very much apreciated. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
nobody's perfect,i realized that not to long ago. well nice post...hope to see more. Regina |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thank you Ina. Your reply is apreciated. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Excellent poem, I love the flow of it. It's really done well, I think I'm gonna add it to my library thingy. Everyone is human, you can only do your best. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
"May the first person who hasn't sinned cast the first stone" We all sin. And as long as we learn from it, we're defenitely headed towards the right direction I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
great flow, i love your work keep posting!!~*Pixie*~ |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
I loved this one so much. It applies to everyone, and a lot to me right now. This world is very hard, and I think that's one of the reasons why people do bad things. Sometimes you just cant take it anymore. But everyone who is human makes mistakes, and most people are forgiven. Great poem it really touched me! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow. That was awesome, in it's own quiet way. Totally my life. Love it.~*Skyfire "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thank you for your replies. This poem really means something special to me. thx again. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
This is yet another great poem. Thank you for posting it. |
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