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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
Everything started out so perfect The perfect boyfriend The perfect friends The perfect family. What more could I ask for? It was all a dream come true. I never stopped to think about all the "What If's" What if things weren't so perfect? Outside I heard the rainfall. I then realized it wasn't just the rain falling from the sky My eyes were filled with raindrops of tears. My fear of what if had finally become so real. My boyfriend and I were to be no more. My friends and I so far apart. My family, so full without care. I saw my dream shatter before my eyes My life felt so void, so empty Everything I once had depended on had now disappeared I started to think of ways away from it all From all the pieces of my shattered dreams Do I go to counselling to get help? Do I just let everything go Keeping all the pain bottled up inside? Or do I just end it all right here? I feel so lost and confused All of my emotions; scattered thoughts and silent dreams If I don't rid myself of all this pain, I will become so empty So empthy that there will be nothing left I see a window A way out of this place...... |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
Hey BabyGirl1, We've all felt like this at one time or the other, but you've done a great job of putting it down on paper. Keep 'em comin'! TAP2 |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
Hey BabyGirl1, We've all felt like this at one time or the other, but you've done a great job of putting it down on paper. Keep 'em comin'! TAP2 |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Very well written. I enjoyed it very much, and I know exactly how you feel. I hope to see some more. Thanx for the the response to mine. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Hey, Sorry I used BabyGirl1's SN to post my reply. She's a friend of mine and I was over at her house when I posted the reply, but I forgot to log on under my name. TAP2 |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! Everyone goes through tough times like this... I can't help but wonder what your "escape" is. I hope it's something positive, such as writing. Just keep up your courage and your faith, and things will work out eventually. Good luck in the future! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
We all feel like this at some point in our lives, but if you keep the faith, Things do get better! Keep the wonderful poems flowing! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ p.s. Welcome to Passions!  ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
I've never seen you in here before...are you new? Well, I'm glad your here. Your words show a lot of maturity...and the fears that even maturity can not rid. I sincerely hope your situation improves...you can always email me if it'll help. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
welcome to this place you'll grow to love it so much as each of us do. great piece and please keep it up and stay with us on your journey. thanks for posting this great read I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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