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first love lost poem |
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mikeykrazy Junior Member
since 2000-12-20
Posts 37U.S.A |
this poem i wrote last year when i lost the first love of my life i was 14 then and now i'm 15 why why do we have to live this life is just a show many times I thought to give and I thought I had to go why must my love leave me why must we be far apart why does this make me grieve and this will always breaks my hart when she called me on the phone we talked all through the night when the news came it made me grown I felt like getting in a fight I went to school the next day and I had a hard time I had no friends in this new school it made my life a fray no one to talk to I felt like a mime why must she have mean friends and why must they hate me why must I have these wondering hands it makes me want to hit a tree the fact that we are in love means nothing they keep on trying to break us apart are hands and were always rubbing she was the most beautiful thing like a piece of art the way that her long hair cress her neck the way the water would drip off her nose here innocent face when she smiled at me made me a wreck and the first time that I saw her I just froze her gleaming face from down the hall I wanted to asked her out when I went with her to the mall and here voice knocked me about but that is all over now her voice on longer on the phone I stop and think how her brother says she is never home how could this happen if we had love we though the world would halt before this but love is not for me and love is not a glove it felt like hit in the stomach |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Loosing someone you care about can be extremely rough indeed. Great poetry here, welcome to Passions!  I hope to see much more from you! *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Losing someone is tough. I hope all is well now. Anyway, welcome to Passions! I hope you enjoy your stay here along with the people. Adios!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
welcome to passions..i liked your poem even though it was on a sad topic...i hope you like it here.. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
welcome to passions! your going to like it. it sux u lost someone u love.all will be well. Regina |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Welcome, welcome! I'm sorry this has happened to you, but realize that you're still young, you have a long way to go, people will come and go. However, they are all in you life for a reason, and you never lose something for no purpose. Although it may be concealed now, one day you can see what that reason is. Good luck! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Welcome to passions!It's so hard to lose someone, but I totally agree with Jenn,it all happens for a reason, even if it you can never figure it out, it happened for a reason Jon |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is a really good poem! it's sounds like it's written from the heart(ok that sounds really corney i know). katherine |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
 WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! This was a very good poem! It is so hard losing someone in your life, especially someone you care so much about or love..I'm sorry that you lost her...It was a great poem tho! Im looking forward to reading more! |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
welcome to passions.... very nice but sad poem i believe. i loved the flow of it, the words seemed to complete themselves. great post salma |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Welcome to Passions I'm glad you've joined our community and hope you stay to share your poetry for a long time. You did a really good job on this first post, I'm looking forward to more! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Great poem!! Wow that was awesome!! Losing someone you care deeply about is always hard. But time will eventually heal that wound, just keep her in your heart and never forget the fun you had. Well you did a great job. Keep writing!! Much Luv, ~*~Priscilla~*~ PS~ Welcome to Passions!  < !signature-->~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 12-26-2000).] |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Hey! Welcome to Passions! Great poem to kick off your stay with us Awesome poem, I really liked it! It showed the hardships you're enduring.. and that's never easy to lose someone you love. Again, welcome, and nice job.*Jennifer |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great Poem... welcome to passions... you are sure to fit right in... I don't know how this one got soo far without me seeing it... but I am glad it didn't get too much further, I may have missed it... great job!! The hardship will soon be over!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Wicced_Witch Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110Clarksville, TN, USA |
Welcome to Passions!! Great poem. Reminded me of when my dad got new orders and I had to move and leave my boyfriend. You're lucky, you're still young. Keep up the good work. ~Steph~ |
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