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Never Be's (song)
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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NOTE: This song is supposed to be sang along with an acoustic guitar and some natural, maybe trance or mood music in the background. This is basically a Radiohead style song. The phase "never be's" is the bulk of the song and it's supposed to be sang with extension. Kinda like this: Neeeeeveeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr BEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee'ssssss. OK so yea...... Never Be's: She's dressed in pastel blue With a pig sty frown upon her face. Walking down the corridors Of what would never be. The never be's. Wide eyes peered around The corner store. What was the purpose x2 of Walking all that way to nowhere? The never be's x4 Gravel struck minds of girlish laundry ways. Oooooooh it could have been sweet, But will never be. The never be's.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
Wow. Incredible.... Quite well done, mi amigo, I love it! Gravel struck minds of girlish laundry ways. Oooooooh it could have been sweet, But will never be. You never cease to impress me w/ that wonderful Dopeyesque poetry/song writing ability, dear. :.) Much love. Vreni |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Dopey, I really hope this music thing works for you, I think your songs are great and would sound great. Nice job on this one, I liked it the way it sounded in my imagination  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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