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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
Stranger Are you that friend The one who promised to stay till the end The one who stood by me When the days were sad and empty Are you that friend Whose broken heart I tried to mend And when others got you down Was it me who turned your frown? Are you that friend The one who tried to defend Everything that this friendship stood for Till the time you had to walk out the door? Are you that friend The one willing to stay till the end But no, what I see before me Is a stranger you could never be |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Wonderful!! Good friends are hard to find and often hard to hold! I hope that all works out well! I love the poem!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
awesome poem. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I enjoyed your thoughts in the Apsara! Great questions, and nicely composed ... well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a nicely penned poem. The message and theme of this was great. Keep em rollin'!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
Thanks everyone. *smiles* apsara |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah, well written, I liked how this was done! Great work "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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