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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA 
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. -=My Parents=- Harsh words... every one in the book Every smile... replaced with a dirty look Tears falling... from all the heartache Plastered smiles... for the kids' sake Love ruined... that never started Missing pieces... of the broken-hearted Once strong... vows once sworn Broken promises... have left lives torn < !signature--> ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ [This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Wow..this is pretty powerful stuff. And you can see right through them, can't you? If you get a chance...read a poem that I posted in the Corner Pub "it's not just the two of us"....Your poem is the reason I chose not to get married just for the sake of my son. This must be hard for you...email me if you ever need someone who understands to listen. ...beth |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I know what you're going through...and I'm sorry to say it. No child should have to endure all this...well anyways...don't get bitter and hateful like me, it doesn't help much...good luck... ~Carly |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
LadyLost~~ hey  Thanks for replying, im glad you know what ive been going thro for the last 3 years..Child of the Stars: no one should have to endure this, but thats life.. ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
oh sweets  Don't make any justifications on whatever mistakes your parents have made to you, or to their relationship. That is a big problem right now in the US. I cannot think of another country that has all these kinds of family problems, i really can't. It does hurt to say that whatever mistakes the parents have made is always harder on the child. I don't have any words of encouragement on this matter. Whatever happiness you could possibly find is up to you. All I can say is talk to me if you feel like it. You know I'll always be here for ya. Don't you ever forget thatI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sorry this is happening to you........good poem though. And look on the bright side, oranges taste good!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
im sorry to hear, great rhyming here, i liked how powerful it was. It really looks like a lot of time was involved on this poem. jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Dopey~~ thanks for looking on the bright side lol jeremy~~ honestly..i wrote this in about 5mins. ive had the idea for awhile and for the last couple days ive been putting the words together and i wrote it all out and finished it in about 5minutes...so nope, not a long time ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
acire - this sort of thing happens in every country, I am in Australia and I also see this sort of thing every day! "The love, honour and obey until death do us part" doesn't exist anymore - It ceases to exist past my Grandparents really. We of this century have little hope of being with someone for "life" I wish that I could be with someone for my entire life - but these people don't exist anymore! Dancin Queen - I am sorry that you have to go through this and my deepest sympathys are with you. You have expressed well what you are feeling, just keep in mind that "Oranges taste good!!" Im a lot unsure what that has to do with it all Dopey - but I liked it's unimportance! Keep remembering that no matter what your parents both love you and always will!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
That's so true Melstar. This happens everywhere. The perfect specimen is in front of me right now.And it doesn't pay to be mad at them cos deep inside, you know that they love you all that much. Great poem. apsara |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Melster --- I didn't say it doesn't happen anywhere else. I meant that it's worse here than any other place. You amongst everyone should know about your asian neighbors. I'm part Asian and part Spanish. Amongst my Asian side which is from the Philippines, you wouldn't believe how much they stay together and try to work things out. As far as I know divorce is illegal there too. And in my Spanish side, it's basically the same thing. You also wouldn't believe the amount of extended families in Spain as in my other side. I guess Something my other side inherited from Spain. I always attribute it to how religous they are. As you know Spain is the reason for spreading the Catholic faith in the world. But i don't say that it never happens there. Everyone or every place have their own. But believe me, it's worse here. At least that's my opinion I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
im gonna use a cliche."i know what your going through, i know how u feel" but in all truth i do, my parents, i can see through and all i see is hate and disgust. the poem was amazing. Regina |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
well i see my poem has become the place of a debate.. Ina~ thanks and the sad part about it all, is the hate in their eyes never goes away...it made fade but it will always be there¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
HOLY GREAT POEM! I HAVE NEVER EVER FROM MY FIRST TIME BEING HERE READ A POEM WITH AS MUCH MEANING AND FEELINGS AS YOU OMG I LOVE IT, ITS THE BEST OF ALL TIME AND I MEAN THAT GUYS. GREAT POEM!!! WOW!!!! "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Brandon~~ LOL WOW thanks for the honor I'm glad you liked it...¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think that this poem was written to play with the reader's emotions, and it sure worked. Great job on this one and I'm sorry that anyone has to go through this. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Lakewalker-- i dont know what it means..ive been feeling like this for like 2 years now. and when somethin to emotionally draining happens to me i cant even write a poem..the words all slur to together so i have to wait till my head is clear. took me awhile on this one...but this was the outcome ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww hunnie im so sorry that your feeling like this..its an awful feeling..no one should have to feel this way. This poem was really touching..i hope things get better for ya gurl!! Love yas...  Muahz |
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