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You Don't Do This To A Friend
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You Don't Do This To A Friend |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
You Don't Do This to a Friend She said she was my friend And I believed that it was true But when some one is your friend This is something you don't do. She knew how much I liked him And she too felt the same way So we decided to make a pact That we'd both stay away. But then our pact was broken When she went behind my back She said she didn't want to hurt me But strength is something that she lacks. I couldn't believe she did this I thought she was a better friend But I guess I judged her wrong Cause she didn't turn out good in the end. She said that she was sorry So I gave her another try But then again she saw him And betrayed me for a guy. The first time was an accident I guess the second time was too She tells me that she's sorry But it doesnt end the pain I'm going through I wont do it again she says Our friendship is worth so much more But everytime I forgive her She hurts me worse than before She thinks everything will be fine But this time she is wrong I can't keep going through this Now I'm not that strong. I just have to tell her That our friendship has to end Cause she has to learn a lesson That you don't do this to a friend. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Wow..great poem. The rythm was awesome. But the meaning behind it sucks. sorry you had to go thro this. But ..."a friendship that ends never began"...she wasnt worth your time to begin with.. keep smiling  Kiley ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. Good poem, bad topic. Good luck with the whole friendship thing... ~Carly |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
wow...thats soo sad!! I know how it feels to be betrayed by a friend...only my friend did not come back asking for another chance. She just stabbed me in the back, and pretended we had never been friends. Things like that make it hard to trust people. Well your poem was excellent. It was very well written. Keep writing!!! Much Luv, SweetStuff ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem is so good, I think you wrote it very well. I liked the flow of it. The meaning sucks, I hope you find someone soon who you can trust as a friend. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
All is fair in love and war  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
A 'friends' true colours show through in times like these! You made the right choice! I hope all works out in the end! Good job!! Melz!! |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
Thanks for your replies everyone...I really appreciate it a lot!! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
utterly cool. jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
really awesome poem. you7 can do with out a friend like that belivie me i'm been through it all so many times! good luck with everything!! kt |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
I just have to tell her That our friendship has to end Cause she has to learn a lesson That you don't do this to a friend You go, girl. Its about time you dumped her. It hurts a lot to be betrayed like that but you're are going to find a better friend soon enough. Great poem. apsara |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
hey babe-- I finally got around to responding to this poem!! I feel everything your saying cuz its happened to me b4 and also im in your life and i know everything thats going on...This poem was amazing...i think it really got the point you were trying to send across very clearly..she isnt a good friend and i know a lot of people think that..i just hope she realizes how much she hurt you...great poem...im sorry that this had to happen with u...no one deserves this |
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