Teen Poetry #3 |
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You and Me |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
You and Me... I love you, and You love me, We can't be together, You and me. I've found someone While you've been gone. You told me... "We'll see what happens" And unfortunately This happened. I still feel The same for you, But came to realise I was only dreaming. We have different lives, We are similar, But We are different too. No matter how much I say I love you still I know that this Is going to crush you. I didn't want this To happen, I wanted you, But I came to realise, That it will never Come true, me and you. I can't turn back time, Not that I ever would, I don't regret The things we said Cause one day We'll see them through! I don't know what this one is guys - it all came to me last night - it is kinda what's happening and kinda not - it is true - I am going through it - but it's difficult to explain!! Love Melz!! |
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ZAOfreak Junior Member
since 2000-11-08
Posts 22CA, USA |
I know exactly what you're going through! I'm usually the one on the other side though. Relationships, I've learned, can really suck. I hope that you are making the right choice. Good luck. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
great poem Melster...a lot of emotion is being told in this one. One thing, follow what you think is right. Nothing in life is easy, if everything was easy, we would never learn and grow to become better persons ![]() I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
its a tough situation but you can pull through, your only helping by writing this beautiful poem! great job I enjoyed reading jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
aww this is so sad! but very nicely penned ![]() ![]() ~*Pixie*~ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
aaaww thats soo sad!! I know what your going through...just keep ya head up, k?? Hope it all works out well for you. Great poem. Keep writing!!! Much Luv, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ |
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Child of the Stars![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This is a tough thing to deal with, but like Acire said, follow what you think is right! Good luck. ~Carly |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Thanks guys - all your support realy helps! I am keeping my head straight and focused no matter how hard - but I reach a new hurdle everyday!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
The emotions in this one were written well, they seemed to be so true. Nice job on the poem and just keep jumping those hurdles!! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
So the situation you depict in this is kinda what's happening, but kinda not?......odd hehe... Anyway good poem, you express yourself well. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
wow this is a really awesome poem |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Thanks everyone! Your support on this matter really helps!! Only 4 days till all will be worked out! Love Ya all!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
It must be really tough for you right now.Keep your chin up. Great job expressing it. Look forward to reading more. apsara |
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