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Melster
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

0 posted 2000-12-16 01:35 AM


You and Me...

I love you,
and
You love me,
We can't be together,
You and me.
I've found someone
While you've been gone.
You told me...
"We'll see what happens"
And unfortunately
This happened.
I still feel
The same for you,
But came to realise
I was only dreaming.
We have different lives,
We are similar,
But
We are different too.
No matter how much I say
I love you still
I know that this
Is going to crush you.
I didn't want this
To happen,
I wanted you,
But I came to realise,
That it will never
Come true, me and you.
I can't turn back time,
Not that I ever would,
I don't regret
The things we said
Cause one day
We'll see them through!

I don't know what this one is guys - it all came to me last night - it is kinda what's happening and kinda not - it is true - I am going through it - but it's difficult to explain!!

Love Melz!!




© Copyright 2000 Melanie Heagney - All Rights Reserved
ZAOfreak
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since 2000-11-08
Posts 22
CA, USA
1 posted 2000-12-16 02:40 AM


I know exactly what you're going through! I'm usually the one on the other side though. Relationships, I've learned, can really suck. I hope that you are making the right choice. Good luck.
Acies
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2 posted 2000-12-16 12:14 PM


great poem Melster...a lot of emotion is being told in this one. One thing, follow what you think is right.  Nothing in life is easy, if everything was easy, we would never learn and grow to become better persons    thanks so much for the great read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair
3 posted 2000-12-16 12:31 PM


its a tough situation but you can pull through, your only helping by writing this beautiful poem! great job I enjoyed reading

jeremy r

"...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~


Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29
Posts 387
Central Maine
4 posted 2000-12-16 02:09 PM


aww this is so sad! but very nicely penned   keep it up  
~*Pixie*~

sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
5 posted 2000-12-16 02:54 PM


aaaww thats soo sad!! I know what your going through...just keep ya head up, k?? Hope it all works out well for you. Great poem. Keep writing!!!

Much Luv,
~*~SweetStuff~*~


~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~

Child of the Stars
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since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658
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6 posted 2000-12-16 02:54 PM



  Hey. This is a tough thing to deal with, but like Acire said, follow what you think is right! Good luck.

  ~Carly

Melster
Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia
7 posted 2000-12-17 01:20 AM


Thanks guys - all your support realy helps!  I am keeping my head straight and focused no matter how hard - but I reach a new hurdle everyday!!
Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
8 posted 2000-12-17 03:06 PM


The emotions in this one were written well, they seemed to be so true.  Nice job on the poem and just keep jumping those hurdles!!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Dopey Dope
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9 posted 2000-12-17 07:53 PM


So the situation you depict in this is kinda what's happening, but kinda not?......odd hehe...
Anyway good poem, you express yourself well.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


katherine
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since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Canberra Australia
10 posted 2000-12-18 03:48 AM


wow this is a really awesome poem
Melster
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia
11 posted 2000-12-18 03:54 AM


Thanks everyone!  Your support on this matter really helps!!  Only 4 days till all will be worked out!

Love Ya all!!

Melz!!


Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

apsara
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since 2000-11-09
Posts 70

12 posted 2000-12-18 03:54 AM


It must be really tough for you right now.Keep your chin up. Great job expressing it. Look forward to reading more.

apsara

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