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Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06
Posts 380
Maine, USA

0 posted 2000-12-16 12:31 PM


Though I’ve only known you
For a very short time,
I’ve a question to ask you,
If you don’t mind…
(And I hope you don’t!)

It’s been a long time
Since I’ve asked a guy out.
But when it comes to you,
My mind holds no doubts.

I would like a chance
To see what we can be.
I want you to be my boyfriend,
So will you go out with me?

*I wrote this for my new BF when I asked him out!   Hi Paul!

© Copyright 2000 Sara - All Rights Reserved
jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair
1 posted 2000-12-16 12:39 PM


its amazing what such heavenly and sweet words can do... ahh the power of poetry...

jeremy r

"...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~


Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29
Posts 387
Central Maine
2 posted 2000-12-16 11:58 AM


I LOVE YOU SARA!!!!  Good luck with my soon to be third cousin! LOL we won't mention his nickname *muahahaha* LMAO  Well this poem is adorable and you knwo i love all your poems!  Lata babe
~*Justine*~

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-12-16 11:07 PM


Excellent job on this one, I like it and I'm glad you've found someone to make you happy

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2000-12-17 04:08 PM


Aww how sweet! very good poem........i'm sure he liked it very much!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Melster
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia
5 posted 2000-12-18 02:56 AM


One word....  CONGRATULATIONS...

At least it works for some people!!

Melz!!


Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

apsara
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since 2000-11-09
Posts 70

6 posted 2000-12-18 03:58 AM


That is so sweet. Good luck on this. Aww. So sweet.

apsara

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14
Posts 375
Maine, USA
7 posted 2000-12-18 08:57 PM


nice i guess

*do not offer yourself to the world, yet let the world offer itself to you*--Me :)

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