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The Chat... The Dream...
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The Chat... The Dream... |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
That Chat I dreamed I was standing beside you, We sat down and had a chat A good laugh here and there, A cruel word not even a thought! There was however difficult words said, These words hard to say between friends Somehow we said it, however difficult, It's hard to believe what's happening. Hurdles must be crossed however, The transition from friends to lovers Ain't as easy as they say, Somehow however we will get through. As friends we said it all, We laughed, we joked, we cried, But nothing is compared, To what we have instore!! ----------------------------------- I hope that you all like this one - it again is about the same person as the others, hopefully we can hope for some happier ones next week when he returns for 2 weeks!! Love Melz!! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
YOu did a great job of descibing this dificult situation IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good luck in all that comes to you with this situation. Good job in expressing and teling us what's going on in your life. Hope to hear happy stuff after the 2 weeks.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
that's a really tough situation u've got goin there. hope it all works out for u  Curly |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's always tough when you begin to feel more than friendship for someone. I was in this situation once, and you describe the feelings really well. Thanks for posting! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Boy is this type of situation a hurdle. Great description of the feelings you can have during it. Good luck Jon |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Thanks guys hopefully I will have everything in tact in a few weeks and know what is going on and I will be sure to write some more poetry to keep you all informed! Love Melz! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
wow, you really long for him, great expressions, hope the best for you. jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I liked the last two lines of this, they showed optimism. I hope all goes well  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is a really good poem Melster. Thanks for sharing it with us. One thing though, take it slow ok. I think the step from friendship to the next level would be better if things are taken slowly. Good Luck  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
Good luck with this new transition. It might be tough though to handle. Stick with it and it might just work out great. Great read. apsara |
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