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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-07-02 12:54 PM

Wow a happy one from Jeremiah WOW i know just please read and let me know what you think

     Birds sing sweet songs of
               Joy
While childen scream playing with there
              Toys
      Watching boys be boys
      No other choice but to
              Join

   Be part of life set up so nice
   Being part of the joy of Love

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

sorrowfulangel
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 59
Memphis,TN

1 posted 2000-07-02 04:18 AM

out of all the things that i have read of yours,nothing spoke up happiness.remember to look for that rainbow

[This message has been edited by sorrowfulangel (edited 07-02-2000).]

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

2 posted 2000-07-02 11:12 AM

WOW!! Jeremiah, I must say I'm very impressed and this is definately a change of pace for you! I hope to seem ore like this from you! Shows an interesting side of you!! I'm glad I got to see it! Thanks for sharing your not so dark side with us! Keep this stuff up!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

3 posted 2000-07-02 04:56 PM

I love the simplicity yet intriquite beauty of your works...keep it going.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

TAP2
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 211
Morris, Il USA

4 posted 2000-07-02 06:21 PM

Nice change of pace. Keep that muse.
TAP2

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

5 posted 2000-07-02 07:08 PM

I'm glad to see some brighter poetry from you, Jeremiah. I hope this brightness reflects from your life.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

6 posted 2000-07-02 07:12 PM

well JEREMIAH this is one of your best poems that i have read...i still have a couple to go...but you changed the thoughts on yourself...it was actually a happy poem compared to the rest...i like this side of you...keep it up...but i like your other poems too...you are a good writer and you are one of the people whos work i enjoy...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2007-11-24 07:22 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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