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The pain,The confusion
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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The Pain,The confusion The pain I endured when u passed on, The confusion I had when I learned how, You are and always will be my friend, So why this depression? You could have come to me my friend, Instead the confusion you brought, How do you think I felt? I was the one that got that terrible email, I had to tell your parents, That there 11 yr old daughter killed herself because she could not bare, The pain, The confusing they brought, Marriage,devorce,step-mom,step-dad, These are the things that took her, The things that hurt her the most. Now I live without someone who was like a sis, Just because I live to far to assist. This is because my bestfriend i met yes she is only 11 but pretty cool no offense you 11yr olds and well im 15 and ive never thought 11yr olds were kool untill i met this one.anyways she has tryed to take her life a few times and well this poem stoped her and well now shes in counseling. sorry im back to the sad poems. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Branden- If I read that right, your poem helped her to go get counselling, that's great. Sad poems are ok, all poems don't have to be happy ones.< !signature--> "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 12-14-2000).] |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Branden... I am glad that this poem saved her... it is always great to know that you saved someone from doing something that they shouldn't! Life is for Living!! I love this poem it is well written and well said!! Love Melz!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Branden good job on helping your friend with the poem. I'm almost 18 and I have a 13yr old for a best friend......well one of them at least. She is so mature for her age. Anyway keep up the good work. Adios!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
well i did stop her and im glad but i mean i dont know poems about suicide.....no good in my book wheather its helping or doing it i just wanna cry  "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey there. Whatever you do, don't let yourself down just because she is. It's not very pleasant when ya do, believe me...This was a very good poem and I'm glad it helped her. Keep writing. ~Carly |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
Branden*~ This is so sad!  ( i'm sorry you and your friend had to go through this ~*Justine*~ |
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