Teen Poetry #3 |
Love Always, Friendship Forever |
Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
It's hard to say when it happened, I guess it's always been there We just never had a chance to take it any further. 18 months ago we met It wasn't simply chance that brought us together We were meant to meet that day! Things are now complex, Our true feelings now we know, That proir friendship isn't enough. Things are looking up for us We finally have a chance to make things work But so little time do we have. It is now time for you to leave me Time to follow your dreams This comes as no surprise, I have known for weeks you were leaving. I never had the chance to say good-bye I never had the chance to tell you how I feel I never had the chance to tell you that I love you I never had the chance to get to love you. So now here starts the long hard haul, First Adelaide then Wagga, 10 weeks and 12 months respectively That you will be away, after that who knows. I know it's an awful long time, I wish I was there with you, I know a lot can happen in that time, But I pray we can stick together. I want you to remember That no matter what happens I will always love you But I'll be your friend forever! This poem I wrote for a friend. We were separated 2 days after he told me how he felt and we nevr saw each other after he told me! I miss him heaps... he returns in 8 days and I don't know what to tell him!! I hope to hear what you all think soon!! Melz!!! |
||
© Copyright 2000 Melanie Heagney - All Rights Reserved | |||
Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
First of all Welcome to Passions!!!I hope that you enjoy it here... I think that you should just let this guy know how you are feeling...Or why not just give him the poem... People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
||
branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Whoa, WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! You will learn that me, dopey, and lakewalker are probably maybe, mostly gonna reply to a lot of poems and were also the craziest (hint hint stay away)jk but i like this poem its just what we needed in passions......FRESH poems everyone take a wif and smell it doesnt it smell great?!?! i think it does great poem! ~brandenbear~ "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
||
Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Melz, First of all WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Second of all, ive been thru this exact situation, and i do mean exact...he and i decided to hook up, dispite the distance, but ol' Tamma fergot she caint handle LDR's, so I broke it off...Good Luck, and I hope you have better wilpower than i do ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner ~*~ Tamma ~*~ |
||
ZAOfreak Junior Member
since 2000-11-08
Posts 22CA, USA |
Great first post! Yeah, you should totally give him the poem so he can have a grasp of how you really feel. Good luck in everything. I hope you keep sending in poems. This is a great place to share your feelings and take part in others' troubles, and just read poetry! I look forward to reading more. |
||
Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Thanks guys, it makes it a lot easier when you know that people like what you write!! ~ERIN I plan to try to give him this poem - he returns in 7 days!!! OH NO!! ~branden I am glad you liked it! ~Tamma I might need some advice in a week or soo!! ~ZAOfreak thanks - as I say I plan to give it to him next week when he returns for 2 weeks!! Thanks for your replys, I have HEAPS more poems that I will eventually get posted in here for all you to tell me what you think!! Till next poem - catch you's all later!! Love Melz!! |
||
Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Welcome to Passions I'm glad to hear you're giving this to him, he should know how you feel. I hope you enjoy it hear at Passions and I look forward to seeing more "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
||
Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Thanks Lakewalker... I am glad that you are looking forward to more peoms - I will post some more soon!! Love Melz!! P.S. I love it here! Especially the Snowball fight!! |
||
Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I surely hope good things fly your way and you continue to enjoy your stay here at good ol passions! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
||
IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I've whacked you w/ snow balls before welcoming you to passions. tisk tisk where are my manners. Welcome to passions hope you enjoy your stay. This was a great first post. I hope the person it is about loves it as much as I did. Look forward to hearing more. IsGona *lobs snowball in your direction, then jets out of this forum* hehe l8r "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
||
jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
hey great first post, tell him how you really feel and maybe things will work out for you welcome to passions, jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
||
katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
first of all awesome poem!!! secondly TELL HIM and if you can't tell him then give him the poem!!!! good luck with it all!! |
||
Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Thanks guys - I am really enjoying myself here! I am enjoying the snowball fight - I sit here in stitches reading it all!! Thanks - it brightens my days!! IsGona - no need to welcome me - I made myself at home!! Thanks anyway!! Jeremy and Katherine - I plan to tell him - next week when he returns for xmas!! Thanks everyone - all your help and support makes being here a lot more fun! I will post more soon!! Love Melz!! |
||
xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I really liked this poem and im really looking forward to reading more of your poems in the future. Welcome |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |