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A Beautiful Trap |
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Al Nany Junior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 16 |
A Beautiful Trap It’s like a tale I’ve once heard, It’s like a path where I was lost many times. Yet, I follow this road, wondering where it’ll end. It’s like song, a beautiful, beautiful, song. Suddenly, not realizing, without knowing, Something is leading my every day, again. It’s the sweetness of the excitement, It’s the taste of love. But this dream, I fear to be awakened too soon. Slowly allowing myself walking in the quicksand, I see no signs to turn, I have no will to turn. It’s like a beautiful, beautiful, trap. June 25, 1999 Personal Site: truethoughts.net ICQ:2477756 AIM:WPALNANYA Other:warcraft3.tv|dotcomtopia.com|peerbooks.com |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so lovely Al Nany! Beautiful expression in this captivating poem!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like how you wrote this one, nice work! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was so beautiful. A poem expressed in wonderful words....i loved it!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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