Never Let Your Body Get Cold

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Teen Poetry #3

Never Let Your Body Get Cold

TrueLUV
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since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-12-11 08:57 PM

To feel your body getting cold all because the one you love has left you.

To understand what she meant to you at the moment when you could of been holding her and she's not there.

To live through and life realizing what she meant
To feel your body getting cold
To feel the loosing of your soul
To see what you couldn't see before when you were blinded by ignorance

To feel your body getting cold from the pain and the sorrow of a lose of a loved one to your own ignorance

To hope that one day you can look into her eyes
To realize that she was worth the sacrafice
To pick up the phone and tell her that she is beautiful

To feel your body regain its warmth
To realize that she is with you
To know she cares for you
To see what she see's and not what ignorance see's

To Love Day In and Day Out
To never feel your soul and body getting cold
To Love as TRUE as one can

kimmy
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since 2000-07-31

Posts 98

1 posted 2000-12-11 10:33 PM

i loved this poem and the wya you were able to express yourself through it...good job..

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-12-12 11:04 AM

To be able to read this was enjoyable, I like it and think it's great

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-12-13 01:28 PM

This was a great poem that I can completely relate to. It was a shear pleasure reading this one. Keep on posting pal!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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