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I cheated, I'm sorry!
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I cheated, I'm sorry! |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
I saw you today, but you didn't see me. I hid on perpous, too bad that's how it has to be. Why is your hate, so incredible emense? How come when our eyes meet, we both become tense. I'm sorry for cheating, but I told you that before. It was a little thing, so why can't you ignore? I loved you once, and you loved me. I really do miss you, it is in the past, that's what used to be. I only kissed him once, and he wanted me too. It didn't mean a thing, but it messed up me and you. We could've seen the stars, and been together forever. but because of my mistake, we will always be never! |
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Minister of Dissonance Junior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 20 |
he who is burned learns quickly not to approach the fire *scarred* the great dissonant one |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
It's hard to go back to someone when they've been lying to you, and cheating isthe worst kind of lying. You can never fully trust the person again, so whether he still has feelings for you or not, it is a hard thing to overcome and come back. Jon |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I agree with what Jon said, try to think of his side of this. It's not so easy to forgive. I hope something can be worked out for you, or that you at least learn from this. Nice job on the poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I kind of thought I'd tell ya all this 4 Cat, it's not a literal type of poem. She didn't cheat on n e one, maybe she was writing this through my ex, C.Aker's, point of view though. Anywayses, great poem catherine!!! I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Sorry for confusing you all but Allysa's right. I didn't cheat on anyone I just write what comes to mind and that did, so I wrote. Thank you for your responses and I know not to cheat anyway! Catherine!!! |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
I am glad to know that you didn't cheat... cheaters are scum!!! I hope that all can be fine in your life and you are happy. You did a wonderful job on the poem. You have a great talent! Melz!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good poem.......but damn MELSTER.....you go!!! haha..........I completely agree.......CHEATERS ARE SCUM! If there was ever a thing that would constitute for me utterly despising a person and wanting for them to burn in the fiery pits of hell, it'd be CHEATING. Why do i feel so strongly about this?......take a wild guess.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Hey, Aww, dopey, did someone cheat on you babe? |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Yes dopey - take a wild guess... someone did cheat on me - recently! I knw the girls he did it with too and they are not worth it!! I've had people tell me that death is a bit harsh - but I don't think so!! He regrets it now! And will for the rest of his life!! Melz!! |
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