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Five Senses |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
Blinded by hatred, Blinded by love, Seeing faith depart, Confused by feelings, Confused by words, Hearing victory fail, Disgusted by actions, Disgusted by thoughts, Tasting sweet sour defeat, Hurt by rumours, Hurt by silence, Touching the unforgiveable, Surrounded by friends, Surrounded by loneliness, Smelling the burning fear, Senses of the body, Sense of the mind, Corrupt the defenseless person. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Ohh I like this one!!! Really creative work here. Thanks for sharing it. I hope that we see more work by you soon!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This was very good, nice job on it!!  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Wow, this WAS really creative. Super job. ~Carly |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good job on this poem. I really liked it and hope to see more of this. I think the title caught my eye completely......the poem was great aswell!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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