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Tears of Glass
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since 2000-12-04

Posts 182
Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure

0 posted 2000-12-08 07:14 PM

It's a feeling of emptiness,
That won't go away,
Playing with your emotions,
Day after day.

It's standing in a room,
Not knowing where to sit,
Worrying that where you do,
You simply just won't fit.

It's a feeling which you can't escape,
However hard you try,
And the longer that it lasts for,
The more you want to cry.

It's counting minutes go slowly by,
Because you've nothing else to do,
But sit and watch others laugh,
And wish that you could too.

*Jennifer

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-12-08 08:31 PM

I thought this was pretty sad. I surely hope things are ok and all is well. Anyway about the poem, a shear delight to read. Wonderful!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Dazed_and_Confused
Junior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 15

2 posted 2000-12-08 08:37 PM

Its a sad poem but it makes you truely think in the end. Very deep meaning.

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-12-08 09:28 PM

Excellent expression of the pain and sorrow accompanying loneliness Jennifer ... very tender ... well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2000-12-08 11:25 PM

I've never really thought of lonliness being described in this way but after reading this i dont think a word could have been described any better. Great poem!!

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2000-12-09 01:49 PM

I really like how you describe loneliness, you did a great job on the poem!!

And if you're feeling alone right now, I hope things pick up for you soon.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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