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I Miss You
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I Miss You The day I first saw you I realized you were the one You said Hello and I knew We went your seperate ways That day We talked once after that I missed you after a couple of days I broke your heart without intention You had always been there to hear my problems Then you were gone I missed your voice I was wrong I missed your sweet messages It's falling apart This is how I feel for you I want to be friends, but I need more Can we start over I miss you |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Very nice poem, it has alotta feeling in it. Keep on writing. Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Welcome to Passions!! With this as your first post, I'm very excited to see what else you're hiding!!  Hope to see lots more from you! You're very talented. Keep it up! I also know how you feel. The pain will go away, just keep your head up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Hey kid..how ya doing?! Thanx fer the email...always appreciated. I really hope you get something out of the forum. You have the talent and you have a place to play. Keep us all reading. Jeremy D. Halstead "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well i voted for this one enjoyed it much. i hope that he/she will forgive you and you can be friends again. you should show this to him/her. maybe it will help you out. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Thank you everyone for responding to my poem. This being my very first poem, ever just seemd to be hard to write, but I am glad that you all enjoyed reading as much as I loved writing it. I love hearing from you all. Luv always, Chel "True friends stab you in the front" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
welcome to passions...i hope that you enjoy it here as much as i do...this is a good poem...keep up the good work...i also know how you feel... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
wow Chel, I'm impressed with your poem. You may become a famous poetor writer someday. I'll be able to say "I knew her when." |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Hello again Chel ... and Welcome to Passions! This is a wonderful first post, so full of longing, beautifully expressed! Keep up the great writing! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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