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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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I just thought you should know one thing, I think I'm in love with you. You're one of the nicest people I know, please tell me what I have to do. I just thought you would understand, you've been through the same as me. Holding on to the one strand of hope, it can't be, it can't be. I just thought you should know, how safe I feel when I'm near you. You protect me from their fists, and what do I do for you? I just thought you should know, I know you understand how I feel. you've expirenced it first hand, not wanting some things to be real. I just thought you should know the truth, that I do try to hard sometimes. I just don't want to leave everyone, and be forced to wonder why. Have you heard whatever I said? now, will you please not go? I shouldn't have said anything. I just thought you should know. ---------------------------------------------------- Hmmmmmm. I love ya alls! Erin, Lakey, Dopey, Hallie Angel, Caz, EVERYONE!!!!! Happy Holidays, hope ya get some snow! I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I'm guessing I'm Lakey, is that my new nickname or something?  Great job with the poem  !"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This is a really good poem. I can relate so much. I can't think of anything else to say so I guess just keep it up! Jon |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Happy holidays to you too! Anyway good poem as usual. Hope things work out.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was an excellent poem...i've been feeling this way for a while now. I hope things work out for you and Happy Holidays to you too!!! |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this poem is really really good all the best with it!! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a great poem, one that I can relate to very well. You should let this person know how you feel, so you won't let them walk out of your life without even knowing how they feel about you. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Well, well well im back in replying to poems and the whole nine yards untill sunday ill be grounded again. well good poem and keep it up its excellent and i felt the same way about my gf when she was gonna move! ~Brandenbear~ "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Lakey: yeah, that's you! It's your new nickname! Anyways, thanks! Send me some snow!!!!Jon: thanks much!! Happy Holidays! Dopey: Thanks, glad you like it! I love you man! Shugar: Thanks! I'm hoping life gets happier! Fairy tales and happy endings! Katherine: thanks much! Happy Holidays! Love bug:Thanks! Hope you have a nice and happy holiday season. Branden: what did you do??? Anyways, Happy Holidays, I'm glad you took the time to read this, I love you too. I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Lakey: yeah, that's you! It's your new nickname! Anyways, thanks! Send me some snow!!!!Jon: thanks much!! Happy Holidays! Dopey: Thanks, glad you like it! I love you man! Shugar: Thanks! I'm hoping life gets happier! Fairy tales and happy endings! Katherine: thanks much! Happy Holidays! Love bug:Thanks! Hope you have a nice and happy holiday season. Branden: what did you do??? Anyways, Happy Holidays, I'm glad you took the time to read this, I love you too. I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Allysa, Lemme guess, that ones for *~~~Timmy Dent~~~* See you tomorrow!!! |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Catherine, just shut up! Just shut your mouth because I know what you're going to say. Maybe it's for him, or maybe it's for, ummm, someone you don't know. Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Love ya girl! C ya at school. I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Allysa, you and hallie r so funny  well, who's timmy this time? I thought your poems are for nitsuj? I guess that's what i get for not following your poems  I love what i read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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