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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2000-12-08 12:24 PM

Let me tell you a story,
About a girl that i know.
Listen closely and with an open mind.
This is how it goes:
They say she has a lot of anger inside,
But she keeps it tucked away.
Deep within her conscience,
Is where it chooses to stay.
Mommy and Daddy want to know,
What happened to their happy little girl?
Well she packed up her things,
Moved away,
And now left with the shell of herself,
Who now hates the world.
Where did there little girl go?
They want answers to their pain.
Looking around at all the possibilitiies,
But no one to blame.
She has no emotion,
She wants to be alone.
The same girl who spoke about life with excitment,
Now speaks in monotone.
It just goes to show,
Things dont stay the same.
People arent who we think.
Their just a soul with a name.
I know this story,
From beginning to end.
For people on the outside,
Its hard to understand.
But i have that understanding.
Of what this girl feels and sees.
It only makes sense,
When that girl is me.

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2000-12-08 05:02 PM

Good job on this, I think you wrote it very well

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Tears of Glass
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since 2000-12-04

Posts 182
Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure

2 posted 2000-12-08 05:11 PM

Hi. I first want to say that your poem was excellent. It brought tears to my eyes. It was very well written and I applaud you for your work! Secondly I wanted to say that it seems like life isn't too easy for you right now. Just know that you have a friend in me, and can email me whenever you feel the need to talk to someone! After all, we are family here in passions. Nice job, and thanks fo the great read!

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-12-08 09:47 PM

You've expressed this so well Shugar ... I do hope things get better. I'm only an e-mail away if you ever want to talk ...

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

~*~PrettyGirly~*~
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since 2000-11-04

Posts 83
Fitchburg Ma Usa

4 posted 2000-12-08 09:49 PM

Hey good poem. Your life will get better, my life wasn't good but then my friends helped me threw my life. They said don't lose control of yourself, I have a disability and I get mad. It's not always fair being me but I wouldn't want to be my sister. Things will get better. If you wanna chat IM me on PrettyGlitter or email me. I'll always be here.
~*~Minna~*~

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2000-12-08 11:45 PM

Thank you everyone for your replies....My friends do help me and keep me going and i'd be completely lost without them. Thank you all for reading

katherine
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since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

6 posted 2000-12-09 02:20 AM

i loved your poem and hope things get eaiser for you

DancinQueen

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since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

7 posted 2000-12-09 03:51 PM

Hey grlie~well been there done that. I was just so upset and angry at things that i couldnt even put my emotions down on paper. i do that alot...but im glad you were able to

Things will get better..they always do, you've like not even lived 1/4 of your life, you have so much more to learn and experience. dont give up now

**Kiley

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2000-12-30 02:42 PM

*bump*...good poem

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

9 posted 2000-12-30 03:24 PM

nice story! ive always wanted to write a story with poetry.... good job!

~JDR

"A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

10 posted 2000-12-30 03:40 PM

I like that one a lot

I think that more people than we realize understand those feelings... I know I do

Great poem!

~*Skyfire

*~Always Canadian*~
~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~

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