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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
Soul Mates By Jessica DeMaio Here I am My eyes are wide My heart is together One thought of you I can not hide I think of forever Distance; Has yet to break What we told our hearts we were destined to make The day of goodbye Was one day I could not describe The day of arrival Caused pain to liberate My days continued With the only hope of fate Weeks have passed Tears have covered my heart with a wound… But still my love, we continue to last… And I dream of you with each passing moon Knowing that distance… Will compress And I will see you soon… So for now I foresee… Knowing in my soul we are meant to be… |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job on this, I liked how you ended it. Nice work  "And I will see you soon… So for now I foresee… Knowing in my soul we are meant to be…" "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Andrea4writes Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 31Fayetteville, NC USA |
That was a very good poem iloved the way you worded it the ending and everything was great keep up the good work <3Andrea ~luvs~ Anthony,<3 You only live once so live it to the fullest.. Love comes and goes but friends stay for ever~!~!~!~!~! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I really dig your style here. This was a great poem. Thanks for sharing IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was great and it's so good to see a new style here at the teen forum. We need a bit of variety around here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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