Teen Poetry #3 |
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How To Reach Heaven? |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
How To Reach Heaven? How to reach heaven, Seems like a rather complex question. But is a rather simple task, All you have to do is ask? First start by realizing, All colours are equal. Race has nothing to do with who is better, What matters is what's in your mind. Every human being, Is one of a kind. The day you look into your brain, And realize that black and white are, Quite the same this day is the day, When you un-deafen and realize, What is truly heaven? Peace Peace is reached, when the world realizes. Hating other races is pure bias. < !signature--> "Live to love or why live at all" Deano ![]() [This message has been edited by Dean (edited 12-04-2000).] |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
I like it, I like it a lot ![]() |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
This is very nice! I like it. Can't wait to see more of your work. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Excellent message and great job on the poem Dean! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think the message in this poem is the best. You are so right about this and it's all truth within truth. Those who are close minded have a one way ticket to you know where. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
this is awesome! I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Hyia! I liked your poem alot bye ~*~Min~*~ ![]() A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time |
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