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Dean
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since 1999-11-23
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0 posted 2000-12-04 10:33 PM


How To Reach Heaven?

How to reach heaven,
Seems like a rather complex question.
But is a rather simple task,
All you have to do is ask?

First start by realizing,
All colours are equal.
Race has nothing to do with who is better,
What matters is what's in your mind.
Every human being,
Is one of a kind.

The day you look into your brain,
And realize that black and white are,
Quite the same this day is the day,
When you un-deafen and realize,
What is truly heaven?

     Peace
Peace is reached,
when the world realizes.
Hating other races
is pure bias.

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"Live to love or why live at all"
Deano  





[This message has been edited by Dean (edited 12-04-2000).]

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AngelShell
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since 2000-03-01
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not heaven nor hell so...
1 posted 2000-12-04 10:40 PM


I like it, I like it a lot


Greeneyes617
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since 2000-11-22
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2 posted 2000-12-05 10:23 PM


This is very nice! I like it. Can't wait to see more of your work.
Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-12-06 04:16 PM


Excellent message and great job on the poem Dean!  

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2000-12-06 04:18 PM


I think the message in this poem is the best. You are so right about this and it's all truth within truth. Those who are close minded have a one way ticket to you know where.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
5 posted 2000-12-07 09:43 AM


this is awesome!

I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad.


~*~PrettyGirly~*~
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6 posted 2000-12-08 08:05 PM


Hyia! I liked your poem alot bye ~*~Min~*~  


A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time



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