Teen Poetry #3 |
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Mirror Image |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA ![]() |
He's a mirror image of my soul He knows of all that makes me whole But he no longer knows For all I see now are smoke and mirrors As if it's all part of a magic show I stand infront of the bathroom mirror After numerous showers during the long strenous weeks Just staring, straining my eyes To rid the disquise I now find shrouding my eyes But all I see is him holding her near I try to focuseach time But my vision begins to blur with unshed tears My heart throbs each and every time I no longer understand I feel no jealousy but perhaps guilt Of everything once felt And pain from the realization Of long misunderstood dedication If only I could reach him Like I did so many times before But I'm afraid that my heart barred and closed that door I wish I could apologize for a thousand lifetimes That's if his heart has not grown deaf from my words God if only he knew That without him I truly wouldn't know what to do And that I'm thankful that it is his eyes of blue And not no one else's That reflects my hopes,my fears and my wishes... "Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night" ~Crash and Burn~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
hey, this was really great, I like how it's written! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
It's good you have this mirror image person to confide in. I assume this is also the man who fits your recipe for destiny. Anyway great job on this one. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i have read most of your poems, and they have all touched me deep. I do hope that you finally find happiness in life. thanks for the share I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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