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Angel In My Heart |
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Angel christmas New Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 6 |
Save me from this lonelyness can´t take it nomore please hold me near and never close the door close to my heart I hold your hand in mine I cry the tears of your love from my eyes you´rethe angel in my heart Help me from this madness I am losing control the pain is to strong please heal my soul from my heart I thank God you´re by my side you are the one who keeps my love alive you´re the angel in my heart Standing on a rainbow calling out your name cause you can take away the pain of a thousand broken dreams with just one touch and that is why I love you so much you´re the angel in my heart ....................Brian.......................... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so full of expression Brian ... sad, yet inspriational at the same time. You're so fortunate to have someone who means this much to you! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really like how you wrote this, I think it's very good!  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wonderful poetry! I really liked the "you're the angel in my heart" parts of the poem. Really stated it perfectly. Great job on this one!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such a Beautiful poem!!! Your a very good writer...you have so much talent!! I've loved every poem you've posted..i cant wait to see more!! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Standing on a rainbow calling out your name cause you can take away the pain of a thousand broken dreams with just one touch ============================================ A beautiful weave of expression here Brian... The above quote just made my lashes flutter from such depth of love you expressed it sooooooooooo well... Ya got a great poem here... coco |
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