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The imaginary balance
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The imaginary balance |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
A heart Its such a strange thing. Nibbling at my soul, Spelling out incomplete words. Its meanings are so confused, What do I do? What do I think? When one part says something, And the other a total opposite? Love Tugs on the heart, Tangles its strings, Feeling obscure emotions. The signals it radiates, An amber glowing aura, Does nothing but confuse me, How do I deal with it? Torn Between Sanity and Romance. What can I do, To bring a balance back into my life? Is there such a balance? Or am I living in a land Of mystery and scribbled thoughts, Forever confusing each dream? ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Very nice poem, one I can identify with right now. ~~ "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Thanks for the reply DragonFang. I haven't seen you for ages..it might be the lack of me in here. Looking forward to getting back into your poetry. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well i hope that this balance is achieved because often when life is not balance out you can go completely insane with this sudden change. Anyway good poem and good luck!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I hope you can answer some of your questions soon, sometimes it's hard finding a balance! "Does nothing but confuse me, How do I deal with it?" I could relate to that part so well, nice job on the poem  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey there. This was a really, really really good piece....Thank you for letting everyone enjoy it. ~Carly |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Thanks for the replies everyone. I have sort of found the balance I was looking for but everything is still a bit hazy. I'm glad I wrote something that some people can relate to. ~F~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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