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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
I'm tired and I see that you too are Strangely I've lost strength to love you like I did Accepting it as destiny I move on Nothing is gained in this state of forlorn I like to lead a renewed life Without any sickness or strife If at all its necessary to renew this love We'll decide after all we've become good friends So its immaterial whether you still want me or not I don't really care for my life now is in rot We neither live nor die and its really a curse I need a good friend may be a faithful person Who will be more than that to share my feelings With you it was really an experience so lovely Just carry on for present is not to grieve over lost love Sincerely A_L |
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Snickers Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88East Haddam, CT |
This is very heartfelt, and I love how you chose to express your emotions. I know you've probably heard it a thousand times, but it is so true that it "is better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved at all". Good luck. ~<3 Alwayz~ **Nikki** |
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mr0001 Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 39 |
awesome poem! i can relate too well  the way you wrote it helped so much to express your emotions. good job!mr  "crazy" is just who you are...amplified. some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
This was really well written. You expressed your emotions well. Great Job  !~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood" |
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