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I Will be There for You
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I Will be There for You |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
When all you need to do is cry, But the tears won't fall, When all you need is to scream, But your voice is lost, When all you need is to talk, But no one's around to listen, When all you need is a friend, But everyone is occupied, When all you need is to confess, BUt you can't trust anyone, When all you need is darkness, But the sun shines bright, When all you need is the rain, But the skies are blue and clear, When all you need is to hide, But you have nowhere to go, When all you need is to run away, But you can't decide where to go, When all you need is a hug, But no one lives close by, When all you need is a deep sleep, But your eyes refuse to close, When all you need is to love, But your heart only aches, When all you need is to die, But your hands won't stop shaking, When all you need to do is dream, But the nightmares come instead, My shoulder is vacant, My eyes are open, My ears can listen, My arms are open, I will be there for you. [This message has been edited by kimmy (edited 12-03-2000).] |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
This is such a sweet poem  good work |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww this was such a sweet poem!! You really expressed just how much you'd be there for a friend in need...very sweet |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
this is sooo sweet great work! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really like what you're saying in this poem. I'm glad! It's not everyday you see people with these thoughs and it's good to see that you're the one who has them. Keep thinkin like this and keep posting!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Where would this world be without people like you?? This is very uplifting, and whomever this is directed towards should feel very lucky. Well written!!xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
It would be so comforting to know that everyone thaught this way. You are a true friend to the recipient of this poem. Thanks for the read IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
What you're saying here is so great, the poem is excellent and whoever this is for is very lucky to have you around. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
wonderful work kimmy...i like it a lot. The message you are sending is really good and one in a while people do need to be reassured that their friends would be there in bad times no matter what. thanks for sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
What a great friend you are and what a lucky person they are to have a friend like you!! Melz!! P.S. Great Poem!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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