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::What You Do To Me:: |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I hate to love you, With all i know. I hate it when you leave, Cuz i miss you before you even go. Your so annoying, With your cute lil smile. Sparkling green eyes, That mock me and blaze like wild. I hate how you make me feel, Butterflies dance tremendously inside. I hate to show you how happy you make me, Its so intense its too strong to hide. I hate how you affect me, By everything you say. Somtimes i wish i could forget about you, Leave and walk away. I hate how i know i can never do that, For my love for you is too strong. And i hate how i still fell in love with you, Feeling this way all along. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
This is a great poem. It's weird how we have such little control over love. You did a good job expressing that IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
hey~i liked your poem it was good..i know how you are feeling right now..i went through this..after while it gets better...i hope it gets better soon though...good poem... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I competely understand how you feel. Don't let him get the better of you, you've lost your heart, but it doesn't mean you have to lose all your pride.  Maybe it's just cause this has happened to me, or maybe it's cause I am stubborn. But, don't let him do this, if what it takes is to leave where he is, or ignore him... try it!! Good luck. Nice poem.xoxo Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
This is SO CUTE! I love it, great job! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was sad because you seem to just not want to be in love with this person. i think that sucks. Love should be a healthy thing. A nurturing experience for the soul. Unfortunately i know how you feel, Keep posting and i'll keep reading!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you did a good job on the poem, keep them coming "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
don't you just hate that  i fell deeper and deeper for a girl eventhough i already knew that i was being played  . my bad i guess. i love your poem though keep writingI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Great poem Shugar!! i hope everything works out for you. *sarah* *The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love somebody else.* |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Don't hate love, it is the thing that binds the world as one and makes us the people we are... I love this poem, like all your others.. keep up the great work!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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