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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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NOTE: So there I was, sitting in history class with not a thing to do. I grabbed my pencil and started to just put together random words that came to mind. The first poem ended being about homosexuality for some odd reason hahaha...(i'm NOT gay hehe)....the second poem came out like this. This is me goofing off with words but it has some sort of meaning........some sort...hehe Silent Mixer: Hey now talk me. Say hi go there. Want you stay be. Can yea, huh, where? State false life why? Stench ew simple lie. Come on now, hey. It, shhhhh, only way.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Interesting. I have no idea though. your title "silent mixer" I think brings some lite into it, but I'm not exactly sure. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Hehe Dopey, this is very interesting, and I'm sure somewhere there is a meaning, but why does everything we do have to have a meaning or reason?  Keep it up Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hmmmmmm...Interesting, very interesting. As for the meaning, I can only make uneducated guesses. One line that made me laugh: Come on now, hey I know somebody that says that alll the time. CrAzY... ~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..........yeah ok, fine i'll say it, nice job  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hahaha yea this is messed up. Anyway thanks for the replies......much appreciated. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Hi again, Your peom could be understood if you looked inside you, I cant possibly do that but I get it I think I do. I have poetry but some of it is kinda personal, I might after a while post some of it. I hope you get around to reading it if I do. Buh-Bye Catherine!!! |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Dopey Help, I need to know how to post a peom. Can you help me please? |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hallie- When you go to the page where your choose a poem to read, there is a button under "Family of Friends" on the right and it says "New topic", if you click on it, it will bring you to the page to post a, yup, you got it, new topic. I hope I've helped you find it and not made you even more lost "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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