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TearsOfPearls
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since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

0 posted 2000-11-30 01:45 PM

Here they come,
my vision blocked again,
shadows of fear
driving me insane.
I run away
but the doubt remains,
crushing my dreams,
my cries in vain,
my visions lost,
my spirit dies once again.

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

1 posted 2000-11-30 03:28 PM

I think it is truely unfortunate that this is the first poem I read by you. I love the way your words flow. nice job here
IsGona

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-11-30 03:31 PM

Very good job of writing this poem, I think it's really good

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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kimmy
Member

since 2000-07-31

Posts 98

3 posted 2000-11-30 05:07 PM

i really liked this poem...it was short but it was powerful all at the same time...good job...

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

4 posted 2000-11-30 05:21 PM

We all have times that we feel like this, and you describe the feeling well. Thanks for sharing!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2000-11-30 07:28 PM

This is so sad. I hope all is well!!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Lani_DarkOne
Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 152
UK

6 posted 2000-12-01 04:03 PM

'my spirit dies once again'
..it's a never ending cycle isn't it?
doubt..something we can live without..
great poem TearsOfPearls..once again..

"..don't get sentimental
It always..ends up drivel" - Let Down, Radiohead

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2000-12-02 01:41 AM

TearsOfPearls-
   you've done an excellent job
   of expressing these painful emotions..
   wonderful write!

   *smiles*
   ~vicky

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 12-02-2000).]

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