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Never let go |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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You fooled me to believing Id never love again I thought you were right Untill i found him He completes me in ways you never could He makes me alive I never felt that with you You were worng i do love again stronger than before Times were great with you they are jsut better with him Don't get me wrong i do miss you but its time to move on Youll always be in my heart but it belongs to him now, you threw it away Dont hate me because i have my life back on track after all we've been thru we can still be friends but nothing more our time is up for love but never let go..... The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
This was a great poem. I simply loved it. And I think it's cool that you can still be so open and honest with the guy who through your heart away and be friends. Great job here. ~Kris ~*Won't you come and hold my hand? This world has taken me as far as it can... without your smile.~* ~*If I never said I'm sorry, then I'm wrong, |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
thank you very much i wrote this poem to try and feel better but it ended up making me feel worse im trying to fool myself that life is perfect without this guy but its not.......im not in love again and i dunno how long its gonna take for me to be again thanks for the reply The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. Hard to believe as it is, I know how you feel. This was a great poem, and I wish you the best of luck in the times to come... ~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I hope that you start to feel better about this soon, you can't let the past control your future. Great job on the poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
OK all these people are right and bla bla bla......but you do have to understand that time has to take its course. You have to heal, and most often than not healing takes a while. That is, if the love was true. Anyway, you pretending to be in love again is stupid. First off, being in love at our age is usually an honest confusion with infatuation, extreme like, or petty lust. For you to LOVE somebody truly it has to be great. I'm not saying you didn't either, I think it's beautiful if you did. Kick butt job!!! Ya know? It's great if you were! Anyway, back to the point.......for you to go from being "truly" in love with this person to BAM another person is highly unlikely. I surely do hope that time does take its course, and i hope that things take a toll for the better. Just chill and hang out with your girlfriends. Good luck and good poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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