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She Did It Again
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She Did It Again |
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ZAOfreak Junior Member
since 2000-11-08
Posts 22CA, USA |
Once again, She led me on. Once again, She renewed my hope. Once again, My throat she chokes. I stripped down, I showed her who I was. She said she was satisfied, Once again, with who I was. She opened my chest, And held my heart. She hugged it, kissed it, And then ripped it apart. Once again she did it. I should have known better. She'll always jerk me around, Use a bomb, to harden a feather. Destroy me, as a sledge hammer to a knat. Tell me I'm not worthy? I'd rather be a rat. Confuse me some more... God's just teaching me a lesson. Abuse me some more... You and your ignorant conception. Pull out my heart, Tell it its worthy. Shove it back in, Now its too Earthly. She held my heart. Rocked it like a child. Then left it for dead, Cold and defiled. Once again, I should have known better. Trust never lasts forever... Never. I thank God, That He strengthens through pain. It's just funny He uses her, To humble me, torn and slain. Deep anger, out of my reach, Swells at the thought, Of that murdering sweet peach. If I'm not good enough for her, Then no one... Ha, she must think this is fun. Once again, She'll come for me. I'll have nowhere to run. Who will set me free? It will take a Heavenly hand, To convence me to even think, Of letting her close to my heart, Ever again. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"She opened my chest, And held my heart. She hugged it, kissed it, And then ripped it apart." This is a very well-written piece. You describe your feelings well. Just from the things I got from reading this poem, I'd say that you should never let this person close to you again. They don't deserve you, and you don't deserve to go through this. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I like how you said: I thank God, That He strengthens through pain. It's just funny He uses her, To humble me, torn and slain. It's an odd perspective on how things ocurred with you and her. I liked this train of thought very much. Well written!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great poem. It has a lot of emotion. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Never say 'I Love You' unless you mean it" |
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ZAOfreak Junior Member
since 2000-11-08
Posts 22CA, USA |
Thank you so much for your comments. It feels good to know that I can share some of the deep parts of my life with you. It also feels good to know that there are people that understand me, out there, somewhere. God bless you all. |
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CareBear3 Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 39New Hampshire |
My friend is going through this right now...and I look at what this girl is doing to him and I hate it, cause he deserves more. You captured that in this poem. God works in wierd ways and I enjoyed that you added that aspect into your poem. I hope everything works out for you. Great poem! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Excellent job on this poem! Don't give into her, you need to stay strong. Nicely written  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Well I dont know what to say. If you let her do it to you twice then next time dont let her. The way you described it, it seems like she thinks your heart is a toy. Dont let her play with it anymore. People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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