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How Do I Say?
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How Do I Say? |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
"How do I say?" you’re on the other end maybe you’re crying too how do I say that my tears are because of you? (the button on repeat the song plays over in my head whispering the words I only dream to have said) begging me to share you speak a velvet tone how do I say that tonight I don’t want to be alone? (I know the words the only lyrics to my heart dying to let them out just not knowing how to start) pleading with me now to tell you wants wrong but how do I say to you that I’ve loved you all along? < !signature--> with the unknown comes no expectations in this i find my peace [This message has been edited by silvrduck (edited 11-26-2000).] |
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PureM Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 22London, UK |
Oh my! Love this! Cleverly expressed, well done. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great!! I liked this one a lot. keep it up!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one is really cool, I think it's really creative. Great job of getting your feelings out, I love this!  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
This was a very good poem,great work, you're very talented. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more of your work. - tq_99< !signature--> "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" [This message has been edited by tq_99 (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
WOW!!! This was really good. Im glad that you shared this with us. It is really creative. I look forward to seeing more of your work here. People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I forgot to add this one to my library. People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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