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silvrduck
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since 2000-11-05
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0 posted 2000-11-26 01:38 PM


"How do I say?"

you’re on the other end
maybe you’re crying too
how do I say that my tears
are because of you?
        (the button on repeat
        the song plays over in my head
        whispering the words
        I only dream to have said)
begging me to share
you speak a velvet tone
how do I say that tonight
I don’t want to be alone?
        (I know the words
        the only lyrics to my heart
        dying to let them out
        just not knowing how to start)
pleading with me now
to tell you wants wrong
but how do I say to you that
I’ve loved you all along?
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with the unknown comes no expectations
in this i find my peace


[This message has been edited by silvrduck (edited 11-26-2000).]

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PureM
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since 2000-11-23
Posts 22
London, UK
1 posted 2000-11-26 02:05 PM


Oh my! Love this!  Cleverly expressed, well done.
Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2000-11-26 03:02 PM


This was great!! I liked this one a lot.
keep it up!



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Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-11-27 02:49 PM


This one is really cool, I think it's really creative.  Great job of getting your feelings out, I love this!

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tq_99
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since 2000-11-14
Posts 45
Las Vegas, NM, US
4 posted 2000-11-27 02:54 PM


This was a very good poem,great work, you're very talented. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more of your work.

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"Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing"

[This message has been edited by tq_99 (edited 11-27-2000).]

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
5 posted 2000-11-27 03:21 PM


WOW!!! This was really good. Im glad that you shared this with us. It is really creative. I look forward to seeing more of your work here.

People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
6 posted 2000-11-27 03:22 PM


I forgot to add this one to my library.

People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

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