»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #3
»
Too Fast
| Teen Poetry #3 |
|
Too Fast |
|
|
Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
When you asked me to marry you My eyes filled up with tears I knew you were the one To calm all my fears This is it, I thought I've finally found the one He's my one true love My dating life is done Then one night I got some common sence Knocked into me That marriage is life It's giving you the key I think we're moving too fast And I'm afraid That it won't last I love you so much And I don't want our love to end But it might if we don't slow it down And wait for our hearts to mend *I'm engaged, and I've been having all these doubts...so I wrote a poem about it. I can't give it to him or break it off with him, because I love him too much and I don't want to hurt him. I just keep thinking that it'll work out, and that we're not headed for the worst. Please, if you have any advice for me...I need all of it.* ~Writing is filling up your soul with words~ --Me |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Nikkisweet - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
I think you should definetly go with your instincts. And you should talk to him, that way it won't be such a blow if you want to marry him but post-pone it possibly. Do whatever your heart wants to do... your heart never leads you wrong. Although it might seem wrong... in the long run you'll notice it wasn't. ~*Always make time to stop and taste the pop tarts*~ |
||
|
Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
I'm doing a little of what I call bumping! I really need all the advice I can get and would appreciate if ya'll replied to this!!! ~Writing is filling up your soul with words~ --Me |
||
Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Flow....  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
||
|
Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Flow? Do you mean my poem, or the relationship? ~Writing is filling up your soul with words~ --Me |
||
|
DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
HOLY HEAVENS GIRL!! URE 15! Moving too fast is putting it in a nice way..ure done movin ure already there! You have 10-15 more years to find "the one" And from what you've told me..thing were moving to fast awhile ago and you were going to back off and see what he did. If things are getting complicated now, just think about what it'd be like if you were married...you'd probably have to throw away all your dreams and ambitions. Now i can see MAYBE marrying someone when ure 16 or 17, on a whim...but not when ure 15. HEck you dont even have your license yet. Babe i'd definetly slow things down, because this is going to be too much for you to handle... "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
||
LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I am also 15 years old, and I have a friend (who is my age) and is engaged.. sort of. She has what is called a "promise ring", which means that her and her boyfriend are going to get married when they are both ready (after college, esc..). Is this the kind of understanding that you have with this person? I know that you love him, but he has to understand that you are very young and you have your entire life ahead of you. Do you have any other plans for the future? Have you discussed these with this person? You might want to talk to your fiancee about these things before you set a date or anything like that. If he really loves you, he will understand. If he doesn't understand that, he doesn't really love you, and you shouldn't marry him. There's nothing wrong with thinking things through. If you want to talk, feel free to e-mail me at weirdbeetlelady@hotmail.com Thanks for posting! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
||
|
Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I would say you should definitly talk things through with him, how far can you get without good communication? Your poem is good by the way  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
||
|
Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Nikki~ Wow. So many things to think of before anything goes wrong. I encourage you to follow your heart and do what you think is best for yourself. You are the only one that could make that decision. Its your life. Asking for help is good. Just make sure you take the right advice. By the way CONGRATULATIONS!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
||
xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Good god do i have a lot to say..hmm where to start...ok well the title of the poem is an excellent one cause your answered your own question...your going TOO FAST!!! I know that you may be in love with him and he may be in love with you and he looks oh-so-cute when he talks about marriage and you just cant break his cute lil heart and stuff but lets face it hun, your a lil too young. Marriage is wonderful and if your having the kinda doubts that your having now..then something is wrong. I have no doubt that you love him, but making this kind of commitment now is going too fast. If he really loves you then explaining to him how you feel would only have him respect your decision and wait until your ready. Maybe you should do that whole promise ring thing like lovebug mentioned...where your basically engaged for when the 2 of you are ready...not just one...so that way you kind of have a commitment but just in case something happens between you two..which could happen...your not bound to a legal agreement like marriage ya know? I'm rambeling but just one more thing....you have your whole life ahead of you..and your extremely lucky to have found someone whom you love this much and who loves you the same in return...but that kind of love is worth waiting for...give it some time and see how things go..i think you should talk to him about your feelings..its not just his decision...LoL WOW that was a lot!! Ok hun great poem!!! XoXo |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
