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A friend of mine....................
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A friend of mine.................... |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Friend where ever you are in heaven I'd like you back for once I'd like you back in my life so we can go to the mall and smile. Friend you left a long time ago it was hard to say "goodbye" you'd be my sheild to support me from things now I miss you and mom and my sisters and Lucy Can't you see how much we miss you. Daddy you were a friend of mine and when the pastor came and said you went I cryed and shaked wanted you back when I called your hospital room no one picked up. I wondered why but then I said oh well he must be comming home you never came home you went to heaven that day will never be frogotten because we miss you I'm doing better now. But I still don't understand why cancer killed you and you were the stongest person and cancer killed you. I miss you I want to go shopping with you I want to talk to you about my illness mom suvi don't understand. I could die of my unknown illness Suvi sits there and doesn't really care daddy my illness is slowly killing me won't you tell the doctors to help me? I don't want to go to heaven yet but maybe someday you were a friend of mine.. Love always ~*~Minna~*~  |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Your poems always use emotion very well, this one included. I think it's really good. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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vix616 Junior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 22 |
I really liked this poem, brought a tear to my eye, you wrote it extremely well and i feel for you very much keep smiling lodsa luv vicki x  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Minna~ You dad is watching you guiding you on the right paths of life, taking care of you and most of all being your friend by doing that. And in the future you will be able to see him again. Thanks for sharing this. People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great! Tons of emotion just like all your other poems!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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