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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
Faced with mortality I cringe Lie awake with silent dreams Of a life I'll never have Useless days pass filled With useless fantasies I think of you. The night is my companion The solitude my guide Would I spend forever here And not be satisfied? Sarah MacLachlan, "Possession" |
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vix616 Junior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 22 |
Good poem - i like the way you wrote it..gav em elots of ideas..keep writing lodsa luv vicki..x  p.s could someone tell me how u get the quotes at the bottom of your messages thanx |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
The way you wrote this is interesting, I like it. Nice job  "With useless fantasies I think of you." "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Ah, I know what it's like to live through those useless fantasies and dreams. You describe it well. Keep up the good work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think this poem is quite different from all the others i read here. I think it's great! The whole style and format and everything about it. I liked this very much! Keep em rollin!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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