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vix616 Junior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 22 |
Nobody wants to so why does it happen? is it because the world would be too crowded? or we've done something wrong? people say it will happen someday, what can we do? except from pray. Everyone has fear - in this the most, so quit complaining about your life today some people aren't so lucky and have no will or way.. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a really nice piece. Life IS a gift, and people who complain about it should be giving thanks that they are alive. Thanks for giving us this message. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
This was really good. I wonder somtimes too why people die. And when you really love them it just insn't fair. Good Job! ~Writing is filling up your soul with words~ --Me |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, Another good one, you're making quite a start here! But what if I like complaining!?!  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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vix616 Junior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 22 |
Thanx for your replies guys..the poem left me wondering aswell, i hope to get the message across to people not to take things for granted and to remember that there are always people worse off than yourself.. luv vicki  x |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great............life is a gift like lovebug said.....live it up!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you know your style is totally different but it's soooo good. you are very talented and i envy your writing skills. Pass some this way will ya  seriously, i've love each poem of your that ive read. thanks again for sharingI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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