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vix616
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0 posted 2000-11-25 09:24 AM


Nobody wants to
so why does it happen?
is it because
the world would be too crowded?
or we've done something wrong?
people say it will happen someday,
what can we do?
except from pray.
Everyone has fear -
in this the most,
so quit complaining about your life today
some people aren't so lucky
and have no will or way..

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LoveBug
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1 posted 2000-11-25 11:21 AM


This is a really nice piece. Life IS a gift, and people who complain about it should be giving thanks that they are alive. Thanks for giving us this message.

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



Nikkisweet
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since 2000-02-14
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2 posted 2000-11-25 12:03 PM


This was really good.  I wonder somtimes too why people die. And when you really love them it just insn't fair.  Good Job!

~Writing is filling up your
soul with words~
--Me

Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-11-25 01:59 PM


Hey,
Another good one, you're making quite a start here!  But what if I like complaining!?!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

vix616
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4 posted 2000-11-25 03:27 PM


Thanx for your replies guys..the poem left me wondering aswell, i hope to get the message across to people not to take things for granted and to remember that there are always people worse off than yourself..
luv vicki   x

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2000-11-26 12:28 PM


This was great............life is a gift like lovebug said.....live it up!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Acies
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6 posted 2000-12-15 06:48 PM


you know your style is totally different but it's soooo good.  you are very talented and i envy your writing skills.  Pass some this way will ya    seriously, i've love each poem of your that ive read.  thanks again for sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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