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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people 
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Cottage on the shore, must I say any more? Peaceful lakeshore breeze, life so full of things to ease, relaxing on the sandy beach, refreshing water's within reach. So calm and soothing this here land, in the dunes the lovers stand, wathcing a sunset in an awe, enjoying the seagulls play and caw. Vibrant colors streak the sky and on this life I do rely. September 30, 2000 "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lakewalker- this is really beautiful..  you've painted a wonderful picture with your words.. enjoyed it much. *smiles*, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I thought the title fit your name.....but duh ......they both have the word LAKE in them. Anyway i liked it a lot!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
your poem held great imagery in it...well written..i enjoyed it muchly.. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely descriptive piece Lakewalker! This holds a special place for me, as I grew up with summers at a wonderful cottage in the Muskokas of Ontario ... such a beautiful place. Very much enjoyed this little trip down memory lane for me! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey everyone, thank you for the replies!! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey there. This was so real to me...would this happen to be bout lake michigan???? Cuz that's what I saw..well great, great job. ~Carly [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 11-26-2000).] |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Great poem LW!!! "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Lakewalker~ What a beautiful poem!!!You have painted a beautiful picture with it too!!!Thanks for sharing it and sorry it took me so long to reply... People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah, this is lake michigan, it's great! Get it, great, like great lake, ha, I crack myself up. ok, not really, but, uh, anyway.... thanks for replying everyone "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Lakewalker, this brought back memories of this summer, spending a great deal of time w/ my bf in his cabin....you painted a picture Regina |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I like this one quite a bit. The syllable count was obviously paid a lot of attention and it made the flow magnificent. Another marvelous post. ~Allan Its rather handy being at the top of the food chain...you can sort things out and not get the blame for it. ~~Elizabeth Johnson (anonymousfemale) |
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