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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia 
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Why is it that... Why is it that the best friends dont always last Why is it that you alwas have to depend on those from the past Why is it that a relationship has ups and downs Why is it that when having fun you act like clowns Why is it that the worse way to miss som1 is when they're next to you Why is it that sometimes your best attempt can't stop som1 feeling blue Why is it that we as people never learn Why is it that when he's gone my heart does yearn * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
I really liked this poem. I have one similar to it that I've never posted before. There so many questions that we all have and so many things that we don't understand...and it just drives us crazy...(i know it does me)..you expressed it wonderfully. Good Job! ~Writing is filling up your soul with words~ --Me |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This poem presents really good questions...all which i dont think i have an answer to. I wish i did though!! Great poem hun! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
luvnkris: Why? Lakewalker: I dunno  You did a good job expressing the questions, even if we can't give you the answer. The poem was good "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This poem was GGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRREAT! tony the tiger, what an inspiration! Anyway i liked this a lot!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i have followed some of your other poems, and this seems to be different. I see you have dicided to use a different style in writing. Or maybe, it was just for this poem. But it still is a wonderful poem. thanks for the share I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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