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luvnkris
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0 posted 2000-11-24 05:47 AM


Why is it that...

Why is it that
the best friends dont always last
Why is it that
you alwas have to depend on those from the past
Why is it that
a relationship has ups and downs
Why is it that
when having fun you act like clowns
Why is it that
the worse way to miss som1 is when they're next to you
Why is it that
sometimes your best attempt can't stop som1 feeling blue
Why is it that
we as people never learn
Why is it that
when he's gone my heart does yearn




* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



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Nikkisweet
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1 posted 2000-11-24 12:00 PM


I really liked this poem.  I have one similar to it that I've never posted before.  There so many questions that we all have and so many things that we don't understand...and it just drives us crazy...(i know it does me)..you expressed it wonderfully.  Good Job!

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soul with words~
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2 posted 2000-11-24 01:05 PM


This poem presents really good questions...all which i dont think i have an answer to. I wish i did though!! Great poem hun!
Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-11-24 03:33 PM


luvnkris: Why?
Lakewalker: I dunno
You did a good job expressing the questions, even if we can't give you the answer.  The poem was good

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4 posted 2000-11-25 03:17 AM


This poem was GGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRREAT!
tony the tiger, what an inspiration!

Anyway i liked this a lot!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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5 posted 2000-12-09 11:45 PM


i have followed some of your other poems, and this seems to be different.  I see you have dicided to use a different style in writing.  Or maybe, it was just for this poem.  But it still is a wonderful poem.  thanks for the share

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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