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Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2000-11-21 09:35 PM


Send no flowers to me
anymore, nothing you do
can make it better, you
were suppose to be the
"one", but you are the
"none"
I don't really care, because
where I used to keep you in my
heart is now just a void, I do
not feel anything
I do not want you back
so send no flowers, you are
never going to be allowed back
in my heart.
Please don't say you love and you
want me back for we both know it
is only a physical lust, for a void
is left in my heart and nothing will let
you back in.
So send no flowers.....
~Ina~
aka Regina

© Copyright 2000 Regina Levy - All Rights Reserved
jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair
1 posted 2000-11-21 09:49 PM


sometimes these situations are tough, great poem tho, good luck!

jeremy r

"...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~


Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
2 posted 2000-11-21 10:03 PM


Those kind of situations are indeed tough.  Wonderful, emotional poem, keep it up!  

*Krista Knutson*

"One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar."
Helen Keller


Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-11-22 04:12 PM


                 you
were suppose to be the
"one", but you are the
"none"


I liked that part, it really states your feelings well.  Great job on the poem, you really make your point

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2000-11-25 03:20 AM


Great job ina!
Me likes me likes.

sad but me likes



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
5 posted 2000-12-09 11:58 PM


very powerful poem.  seems like you already know what you want, and that's good.  keep it up and keep sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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