Teen Poetry #3 |
Send no flowers |
Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Send no flowers to me anymore, nothing you do can make it better, you were suppose to be the "one", but you are the "none" I don't really care, because where I used to keep you in my heart is now just a void, I do not feel anything I do not want you back so send no flowers, you are never going to be allowed back in my heart. Please don't say you love and you want me back for we both know it is only a physical lust, for a void is left in my heart and nothing will let you back in. So send no flowers..... ~Ina~ aka Regina |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
sometimes these situations are tough, great poem tho, good luck! jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Those kind of situations are indeed tough. Wonderful, emotional poem, keep it up! *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
you were suppose to be the "one", but you are the "none" I liked that part, it really states your feelings well. Great job on the poem, you really make your point "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job ina! Me likes me likes. sad but me likes I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very powerful poem. seems like you already know what you want, and that's good. keep it up and keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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