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branden726
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0 posted 2000-11-23 05:04 PM


She IS!

She is the one I want,
She is the one I love,
She is the one that no one can take away,
She is the one that has always been cute,
She is the one I have had my problems with,
She is the one I worked through everything with,
She is the one who has always been there,
She is the one who didnt leave me when times got hard,
She is the one that i know i will always have,
She is the one who in time has showed me how much she loves me,
She is the one that well on this Thanksgiving day will not touch meat but hey thats okay,
She is the one I will FOREVER LOVE,
She is the one named Lisa and She is the one that will never loose my love.


[This message has been edited by branden726 (edited 11-23-2000).]

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Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-11-23 09:02 PM


Branden, this one was great, I love the part about not eating meat, that made me laugh   I don't eat turkey, is there anything wrong with that?!?  Good job on the poem, sounds like things are really going great for you

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Isabel Galaxia
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2 posted 2000-11-23 11:15 PM


Hey this was really good.  I liked the meat thing too  .  Keep it up, and show this to her
Bel

branden726
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3 posted 2000-11-24 10:12 AM


WEll thanks Lakewalker and Isabel for the reply's ya my gf is a vegatarian and well i just needed something to put in there i dont really have n e objections against it i just wish she didnt feel that way i mean she's only 15 but i do respect her her decision.

"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"


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4 posted 2000-11-25 02:38 AM


MEAT ALL THE WAY BABY!

MMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


branden726
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5 posted 2000-11-25 11:52 AM


Hey Dopey? Your always the one to stick out lol hey man i love the reply and my gf said gross. But hey i love meat to so lol shhhh dont tell.
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