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This Is Love |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
My heart controls my mind My mind is looking for answers it will not find My eyes can see As it watched my hands give you the key My lips sing As my earings swing My legs dance And in your arms we make romance From my eye comes a tear Caus I know when I'm with you There's nothing to fear There's somthing inside me that says this is right My heart has reached it's highest height I know exactly what to do So in your ear I whisper I love you... *~This is decitated with all my love and heart and soul to my faincea..Jeremy...Together forever, that's they way we'll be~* ~Writing is filling up your soul with words~ --Me |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hi  this was lovely. Its good to hear that you can love someone like this. Almost made me cry Keep up the great work~!*DQ*!~ "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so sweet and tender Nikki ... so very lovely, beautiful sentiments! Best wishes, /Kit |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Nikki- beautiful...such loving and tender thoughts you've penned.. enjoyed it much. *smile*, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one is really good, it's sweet "There's somthing inside me that says this is right My heart has reached it's highest height" "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This poem is really sweet. I, also, think it is great to love someone with such a magnitude. Good luck, and you're already very lucky to have someone like your fiance. xoxo Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is such a beautiful love poems!!! This LoveBug gives it 2 thumbs up! I'm so glad that you have someone who makes you feel this way. Thanks for sharing! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sweet poem! I liked it a lot!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Nikki~ You always have the sweetest poems...And this is another one...Keep it up...You have a way with the words...I love the way this ended... People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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