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She's gone without a trace.
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She's gone without a trace. |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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She's gone without a trace. She is gone now, Not even the littlest thing is left, Not her love, not her beauty, She has left me and o ya it hurts like hell, The one i onced loved has left me for another man, Yeah i always thought she was hiding something, It was just a matter of time before i knew, Gosh if i had only knew that this realationship would've blew. Here is a short piece ya know this is how i feel that ill be in a lil bit me and my gf are still together and working things out but somehow i still feel i dont know hesitant i think. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hmmm..sometimes we are hesistant about trusting the person you love when they betrayed the trust you had together. I dont blame you one bit. The only medicine for this wound is time  Keep your chin up and keep writing!~!*DQ*!~ "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you need to stop trying to predict what will happen, and work to get things to happen the way you want them to. Ok, I don't wanna sound mean, but it just seems you need some optimisim. ...but if you still feel something's not right, try to find out what's going on than decide what's best for you. did any of what i said make sense?? Anyway, great poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey there i kinda feel really bad about this poem because i wrote it before i even talked to my gf and well i dont think there will be n e more like this about us. i talked to her and found out what she was hiding and well now im nothing but happy!!!!!! THANKS for the replies! "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
branden- i'm really sorry i'm late getting to this one, but i'm very happy to hear that you've talked it out with your Girlfriend, and that everything is going well.. she's lucky to have a boyfriend like you who cares enough to work things out with her, and talk to her about things.. hope to see lots more happy writes from you... *smiles*, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Branden- It sounds great, I hope things stay good for you "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You ALWAYS freakin' scare me when you write those poems and finally i read the ending sayin "oh...yea this is just me feeling like this.....it hasn't happened" and im like AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! haha....oh well, great job and im glad you're still together!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey im sorry i scare ya sometimes dopey but hey sometimes i scare myself lol and well ive seem to of been doing that a lot lately. i dont know im just glad she told me that one "thing" ya know well ne ways thanks guys "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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