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kimmy
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0 posted 2000-11-21 08:27 PM



Dearly beloved gather,
Sharing in sorrow and pain,
To be near enough to touch,
But far enough to gain,
Gazing upon the gladness,
Rejoicing in all's sorrow,
Today we fight to begin,
Work for a better tomorrow,
Awaiting the treacherous journey,
For the endless path we follow,
Towards better days; better nights,
They make us feel less hollow,
Trailing behind the people,
While they wait for you ahead,
Pausing once to admire,
The group that's anyting but dead,
Changing faces come daily,
Not one we shall forget,
Passing them on our quest,
And we are all glad we met,
Our lives won't be the same,
Becasue of the people we know,
The memories shared remembered,
Each one helped us grow,
Creeping silently to the edge,
They always seem to hear the cry,
Pain you feel is slowly mended,
For the true friends wil always try,
Falling helplessly and regretful,
To the bottom of an empty hole,
Someone is always there to catch you,
And lighten up your darkened soul,
Chersih the friends you have,
For one may be lost on the trail,
Sadness overcomes the one,
Whose friendship remorsefully failed,
Love everyone whose dear to you,
If you  go the extra mile,
The ones who know and feel your emotions,
Are the ones who care to smile.

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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-11-21 08:58 PM


This is just wonderful Kimmy! What a lovely and positive message you've woven into this beautiful verse of friendship ... nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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2 posted 2000-11-22 04:07 PM


"Our lives won't be the same,
Becasue of the people we know,
The memories shared remembered,
Each one helped us grow,"

Excellent job on the poem, I like it a lot


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3 posted 2000-11-23 08:35 AM


Omg i absolutely LOVED LOVED LOVED this poem!! I thought it was amazing!! Great job hun!!!
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4 posted 2000-11-25 03:44 AM


I'm going to have to echo the rest on this one hehe.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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